ext_119945 ([identity profile] janeturenne.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] daylyn 2009-02-15 11:52 pm (UTC)

This is beautifully written. The scene at the train station is actually one of my favorite bits, because you managed to convey so much so subtly.
Looking forward to the rest!
(21 comments)

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting
 
Notice: This account is set to log the IP addresses of everyone who comments.
Links will be displayed as unclickable URLs to help prevent spam.