http://users.livejournal.com/_nextboldmove_/ ([identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_nextboldmove_/) wrote in [personal profile] daylyn 2010-04-05 05:03 pm (UTC)

I really enjoyed the cadence of this piece. It’s a bit stilted at times but not in a bad way-it really fits with how you’ve drawn Hotch’s inner thoughts as being stilted. I think the way Reid takes charge of the situation and forces Hotch to re-evaluate what’s going on is also interesting and fun to read. Thanks for sharing!

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