I really enjoyed the cadence of this piece. It’s a bit stilted at times but not in a bad way-it really fits with how you’ve drawn Hotch’s inner thoughts as being stilted. I think the way Reid takes charge of the situation and forces Hotch to re-evaluate what’s going on is also interesting and fun to read. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 2010-04-05 05:03 pm (UTC)