Just what I needed. I really liked how you progressed the timeline with them and the evolution of their relationship. I adored Jack and how he grew up, the influences of both parents. The dialogue with Dave was charming. The ending? Guh. But yeah. There. Cheers and thank *you* for sharing!
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Date: 2010-06-27 09:29 pm (UTC)