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daylyn ([personal profile] daylyn) wrote2004-05-03 02:47 pm

His Screams Fill The Night


Here's my first 100-word drabble. It was written with [livejournal.com profile] arrmaitee.


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His Screams Fill The Night

by

Daylyn


His screams fill the night.

The boy lies in the infirmary, pale in the moonlight; his lightening-shaped scar bleeding dark red.

Albus senses my approach. “Severus, how are…?” he falters.

I gaze into his cold, opaque eyes. I want to cry out… to make him taste Lupin’s spattered blood and witness my lover’s silent stoic stare as I bludgeoned him in service to the Dark Lord.

“Fine, Headmaster,” I reply instead.

“Severus,” he utters uneasily. “I didn’t mean…”

I walk away, unwilling to hear his false platitudes. He will never understand.

Only the screaming boy and I know the pain.


Wow!

[identity profile] at-splicken.livejournal.com 2006-02-17 02:18 am (UTC)(link)
You can just feel the pain in this, and the image of Severus bludgeoning Remus as he stood and stared at him is really vivid. Brilliant.

Re: Wow!

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2006-02-17 08:32 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! It's so cool to get a comment on something I posted so long ago. This is still one of my favorite pieces I've done, because it has so much pain and horror condensed into 100 words. Thanks again.