His Screams Fill The Night
May. 3rd, 2004 02:47 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
daylynHere's my first 100-word drabble. It was written with
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Daylyn
His screams fill the night.
The boy lies in the infirmary, pale in the moonlight; his lightening-shaped scar bleeding dark red.
Albus senses my approach. “Severus, how are…?” he falters.
I gaze into his cold, opaque eyes. I want to cry out… to make him taste Lupin’s spattered blood and witness my lover’s silent stoic stare as I bludgeoned him in service to the Dark Lord.
“Fine, Headmaster,” I reply instead.
“Severus,” he utters uneasily. “I didn’t mean…”
I walk away, unwilling to hear his false platitudes. He will never understand.
Only the screaming boy and I know the pain.
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Date: 2004-05-03 11:02 pm (UTC)So few words ....
Kudos!!!
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Date: 2004-05-04 05:35 am (UTC)I read this, and it made me cry and want to vomit.
I praise you. This was fantastic.
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Date: 2004-05-04 06:24 am (UTC)I know what you mean, though. The piece disturbs me as well. I have know idea where it came from, but I was compelled to write it.
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Date: 2004-05-04 08:55 am (UTC)Raw emotion... I like the last line a lot.
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Date: 2004-05-12 09:29 pm (UTC)Nice...
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Date: 2004-05-16 04:49 am (UTC)Glad you liked it. Yes,
Anyway, thanks for dropping by; it's nice to meet you!
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Date: 2004-06-29 06:57 am (UTC)Review
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Date: 2004-07-31 09:17 pm (UTC)Thanks so much for the feedback. It's just 100 words, but yes, it is disturbing. I keep thinking of expanding it from this point... maybe someday.
Thanks again.
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Date: 2004-08-06 02:38 pm (UTC)That was amazing, one of the best drabbles I have ever read. It just, struck such a chord with me, so powerful.
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Date: 2004-10-14 03:02 pm (UTC)It's actually the title that caught my attention, I like the sound of it, sad but beautiful.
That's just a wonderful piece of work. ^_^
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Date: 2004-10-20 08:22 am (UTC)And Ce Nedra as your LJ user name. Way cool. I actually am a big fan of the Belgariad.
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Date: 2005-07-12 03:12 pm (UTC)Gorgeous.
I think I cried a little..
Date: 2005-09-04 05:40 pm (UTC)loved it.
Wow!
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