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daylyn ([personal profile] daylyn) wrote2004-08-03 02:21 pm

A Cry in the Dark

A Cry in the Dark

by

Daylyn



Draco Malfoy prowled the Forbidden Forest, alone.

His vampire skills were honed for the hunt. Draco knew that soon his hunger would be insatiable, his thirst for blood intense. He was searching for someone to take, to own, to bleed. To kill.

And then he sensed it. A cry in the dark. A shriek of pure pain and torment, of forlorn despair. Draco recognized this cry; he’d heard it before. He knew of one who called out in desperate anguish; he knew whose soul longed for death.

Draco moved toward the tortured cry, his footsteps silent. On the edge of the Forbidden Forest, under the bleached light of the moon, he saw his quarry at the edge of the lake. Harry Potter.

Harry sat listlessly, watching the ripples on the water. Draco silently approached. “Thinking of drowning yourself, Potter?” he asked, standing just behind Harry. “How terribly melodramatic.”

Harry leapt up, his wand held at the ready. “Malfoy,” he said, his eyes widening in surprise and recognition. A few feet separated the wizard from the vampire. The silence between them was palpable.

“You startled me,” Harry said, breaking their gaze and lowering his wand.

“I startled you again?” Draco asked. “Seems that I’m always startling you, out here in the moonlight.”

“That was another life, another time,” Harry replied. “It’s… different now.” Harry looked into Draco’s silver eyes, bright with preternatural power.

“Yes, it is,” Draco agreed. “We’re no longer so young… so innocent.”

Harry shook his head, pain evident in his haunted green eyes.

Draco moved closer until mere inches separated them. He lifted his hand to Harry’s face, fingertips lightly caressing the lightening-bolt scar. “Do you remember that night, Harry?” Draco whispered. “How I found you out here, crying in the moonlight. It was a night like tonight, wasn’t it?” Draco leaned in and kissed Harry’s jaw.

Harry’s eyes closed. “Yes,” he replied in a shuddering whisper. He could feel Draco’s breath ghosting over his face.

“Do you remember how surprised you were by the taste of our first kiss?” Draco gently kissed the corner of Harry’s mouth. “How that kiss quickly fueled our passion? How we spent one night making love, only to be torn apart by dawn’s cruel light?”

“Yes,” Harry sobbed.

“Do you remember how we held onto each other in desperation, knowing there was nothing we could do to stem what was coming; nothing we could do to prevent the dark times?” Draco asked softly, gently kissing Harry’s face. “Two former adversaries, clinging desperately to each other in the night,” Draco breathed into Harry’s ear.

Harry whimpered.

“You feel that desperation again, tonight, don’t you?” Draco whispered, his breath causing Harry to shudder. “But it’s worse now, isn’t it?”

“Oh god, yes,” Harry cried.

“Let me help you again, Harry,” Draco murmured, kissing his way up Harry’s jaw line. “Let us ease each other’s pain like we did that night.”

Harry could feel Draco’s lips as they kissed his cheeks, his eyes, his scar. Harry felt those lips press against his own, and he shivered as he opened his mouth in response.

The kiss deepened, and Harry’s tongue was gently drawn into Draco’s mouth and across Draco’s teeth. Harry felt the sharp points of the vampire fangs, and pulled back in shock. “No!” Harry cried, and broke away from the embrace.

Draco smiled and minimized the distance between them. He reached out to stroke Harry’s face once more. “I truly lived that night, making love to you here under the stars. It was the last night that I was alive.”

“Draco, stop,” Harry pleaded. Draco leaned in and kissed him again. “Stop,” Harry whispered once the kiss ended.

“Do you remember our promise to meet here?” Draco cupped Harry’s chin, lifting it up and forcing their eyes to meet. “After it was all over, we were to meet here again.” Draco gently kissed him. “And we’re here, aren’t we? Fulfilling our promises to each other.”

“What about our promise to help each other survive?” Harry asked in a lamenting, bitter tone. He shut his eyes tight. “We failed miserably at that, didn’t we?”

“That depends,” Draco replied, his fingers now caressing Harry’s neck, tracing Harry’s pulse point. “I still survive,” he whispered into Harry’s ear. “But I’m alone, Harry. We could still help each other, you know.”

“I don’t need your help,” Harry said, pulling back.

Draco smiled. “Oh really?” he asked. “Then why, pray tell, is The Boy Who Lived planning suicide in the dark?”

Harry stepped back. “I don’t know what you mean, Malfoy,” he said.

Draco moved closer once more. Harry looked wary but determined to hold his ground. Draco whispered into Harry’s ear, “I can sense your swirling thoughts. I can taste your despair. Your guilt.”

Harry froze, panting erratically as Draco continued to breathe in his ear. “My guilt?” Harry asked.

“Oh yes, your guilt,” Draco replied. “I can sense it, Harry.” Draco moved behind Harry, and gently tilted his head to one side. “You feel like you killed everyone you ever cared for, don’t you?” Draco continued, his lips softly kissing Harry’s neck.

“Yes,” came Harry’s muffled sob. “All dead. I killed them all.”

Draco’s heightened vampire senses perceived Harry’s increased heartbeat, his unsteady breath. Draco could almost taste the rapidly pumping blood. His hunger increased. He wanted Harry. He needed him. Draco longed for Harry to end his loneliness. He longed to consume him, to consume his life, his blood, his love, his soul.

Draco ran his tongue lightly along Harry’s neck, up to the earlobe, sensing the pulse. “You killed no one, Harry. It wasn’t your fault,” Draco said softly, sucking on the ear, drawing in Harry’s turmoil and pain.

“I killed everyone,” Harry sobbed. “They all died because of me. My parents, Sirius, Cedric, Hermione, so many Weasleys, Dumbledore, even Snape.” Harry turned his head to meet Draco’s eyes. “Even you, Draco. Even you.”

Draco turned Harry’s head to the other side, and lightly sucked on Harry’s neck. Not drawing blood… yet. Just anticipating the moment. The vampire’s blood lust was increasing. Draco knew it would soon overwhelm him. Harry whimpered.

Draco slowly sucked his way up to Harry’s ear. “You didn’t kill me,” Draco countered. “The Dark Lord changed me. He’s the one who brought the vampires into the Second War.”

“No, you don’t understand,” Harry argued. “If it wasn’t for me, you wouldn’t have been hurt. I loved you, and that love marked you for death.”

“I didn’t die.” Draco bit Harry’s earlobe drawing blood, causing Harry to whimper. “I just lost everything.” Draco sucked; Harry gasped. “I’m alone, Harry. My family’s gone. My friends are dead. Like you, I have nothing left.” Draco pulled his mouth away from Harry’s life force. “Nothing, except you.”

Draco’s mouth drifted down Harry’s neck, nuzzling at the pulse point. Harry moaned quietly. “You are dead, Draco,” Harry stated. “You’re the living dead. A vampire. A killer.”

Draco smiled into Harry’s neck. “Ah, then based on everything you’re saying, I’m a killer like yourself.”

“No,” Harry cried, trying to pull away. Draco held him in place. “No,” Harry repeated quietly. “I was forced to kill Voldemort. I was forced… the others died because of that.”

“And I’m forced to kill… as a vampire,” Draco countered. “I’m forced to kill to survive. Like you.” Draco’s tongue moved to the back of Harry’s neck, slowly sucking. “You survived, didn’t you, Harry? You killed to survive.”

Harry merely whimpered.

Draco’s arms encircled Harry’s body. The blood lust was becoming uncontrollable. He moved his mouth back to Harry’s neck. “But now you long for death, don’t you?” Draco asked. “And I long for you.” Draco kissed Harry’s neck once more. “Let me make you like me… a vampire.”

Harry’s breath hitched, his body tensing, his heart rate increasing. “Draco, no,” he whispered.

“Harry,” Draco said. “It’s all over now, for both of us. And you know it. You know it’s your time… your time to die. That’s why you came out here tonight. You came here to die. I sensed your cry in the dark. You want it. You need it. And I’m going to give it to you.”

“Draco …” Harry broke off, his voice strangled, as Draco began to suck on his neck again.

“I need you,” Draco whispered. “And you need me. We can finally be together.”

Harry sobbed. “Draco, not like this.”

Draco turned Harry’s head toward him, kissing Harry’s tears from his face. “You know you want to die, Harry. You want this pain to end. So do I. Join me, and your death can become our life.”

“Not like this,” Harry pleaded. “Not as killers.”

“Killers?” Draco exclaimed. “You are a killer. You said it yourself. Everyone you love is dead because of you. Everything you touch is destroyed. Look at what I am because of you.”

Harry’s breath hitched. “I didn’t mean for you to be turned into a vampire,” he sobbed. “Kill me if you must, but please, don’t turn me into a monster.”

“A monster?” Draco replied. “You’d never be a monster, Harry. You’re beautiful. And my gift will give you life. It will give us life… together.”

Draco could feel Harry trembling. “Together?”

Draco’s lust for blood lust was becoming irresistible. He knew he had to have Harry, right then. Draco moved his mouth back to Harry’s neck, fangs bared. “I won’t lose you again, Harry.” Draco bit down, sucking Harry’s blood, draining his life.

“No, Draco!” Harry cried out, yanking away with surprising strength, two streams of blood flowing down his neck. “No,” he said again in a panted, broken whisper.

“You don’t understand, Potter,” Draco growled, his need for blood desperate. “I will have you tonight. I won’t be denied anymore.” Draco forcefully lunged for Harry, who barely had time to raise his arms in defense before he was knocked to the ground.

Pain. Sharp, shearing pain encompassed Draco, pulsating from his chest. Draco drew in a shuddering breath and looked down at the space between them. Harry’s holly wand was impaled in Draco’s chest. A perfect wooden stake piercing a shattered lonely heart.

Shocked silver eyes lifted to meet terrified green ones. For one infinite moment, their gazes locked. They were sending, receiving, and suffering each other’s feelings, thoughts, and fears. A wind blew, the moment was gone, and the end had come.

As Draco was overwhelmed by darkness, he thought he heard a whispered, “I’m sorry,” but then he knew no more.


Finis

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[identity profile] arrmaitee.livejournal.com 2004-08-03 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Congrats! This is awesome!

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-03 10:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for all your help!

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*drools*

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[identity profile] y0urotherleft.livejournal.com 2004-08-03 10:18 pm (UTC)(link)
aw! tis sad, but excellent writing. i am jealous to the max like whoa!

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-03 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. The excellent writing comes from much, much editing.

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[identity profile] iddy-chan.livejournal.com 2004-08-03 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)
That is just beautiful!
I'm almost crying here. Absolutely loved it <3

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-03 10:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! You know the sad thing -- I would get teary reading this. I don't know if I'm supposed to make myself cry.

Glad you liked it.

[identity profile] ksenia-blondie.livejournal.com 2004-08-03 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
An awesome story!!! *worships* And your Draco is exquisite - so manipulative and oh-so-cold-hearted-and-hot-blooded!

I just can't stop thinking about the fact that his true love for Harry seemed to die the moment Draco was turned... Am I right or wrong???

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-03 11:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. I'm sort of blown away by your take on Draco, because that's not really how I saw him. To me, he was quite lonely -- but he was also a manipulative killer, willing to do whatever it took to get what he wanted -- Harry.

I think a part of Draco still loved Harry, but I certainly appreciate your perspective. It's cool to put something out there and see how different people interpret it.

I'm glad you liked it.

[identity profile] peeping0x0tom.livejournal.com 2004-08-03 11:55 pm (UTC)(link)
*lip wibble*

Awesome. Just.. awesome. But...*lip wibble*

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 12:09 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Sorry about the *lip wibble*

[identity profile] thatzeppogirl.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 01:40 am (UTC)(link)
A perfect wooden stake piercing a shattered lonely heart.

I love that line. Perfectly and hauntingly beautiful. Never would have expected that. <3

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 04:47 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you.

I like that line too; it's actually one of my favorites in the fic. It's funny -- I came up with the ending first, and then had to write story almost backwards.

[identity profile] pirate-chick69.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 02:08 am (UTC)(link)
that was beautiful. i don't have a long review to give you. i don't have critisism. i don't even have some arrmaitee wit to bestow upon you. it was beautiful and i thank you for sharing it. there really is naught else to say.

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 06:22 am (UTC)(link)
The fact that I was able to leave someone speechless is pretty cool. Thank you for such a nice review.

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[identity profile] supergirl69187.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
oh, wow. that was good. sad ending. =( but good story, your writing is very skilled and captivating.

(Anonymous) 2004-08-04 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
good stuff! hehe sad but really good! =D

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[identity profile] zoeicedraconis.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 05:26 am (UTC)(link)
I'll be honest, if i was Harry i'd let him turn me vamp. lol, but Harry is all noble.
And great fic. Very very nice.

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 06:24 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, it would be pretty hard to turn down Vampire Draco. Silly Harry, being all sad and noble.

Thank you!

[identity profile] latchi.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 07:06 am (UTC)(link)
very nicely done. i'm only not crying because my eyes are too dry to allow it. ...i read in an earlier comment that you'd get a bit teary reading this... you're not alone. i've actually cried as i was writing before... i laughed at myself later for crying at fiction, but it all turned out good. the chapter ended with all my characters (and readers) in tears, but they all wanted more. no matter what emotion you cause your readers to feel, it will motivate them to read more!

keep up the good work!

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 07:50 am (UTC)(link)
I stopped getting teary after a while, mainly because I edited it so often, but sometimes I would read it and think, "Damn, that's sad."

It's quite a compliment to know that I've touched other people. Thank you so much for your review.

Also, where can I find your fics? I'd love to read them (when I'm in need of a good cry).

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[identity profile] ooo-danni-ooo.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 09:53 am (UTC)(link)
really enjoyed this, very nice thankyou for writing this it's beautiful

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 04:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] mjdolce.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 12:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, what a wonderful fic!

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 04:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] humdrumtown.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 05:37 pm (UTC)(link)
may i put this in my memories doohicky?

because this story really really rocked. the ending was sweet, dark, and beautiful.

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course you can put this in your memories. What a compliment. Thank you so much.

[identity profile] littlearsonist.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, so my throat just aches right now. All because of you! This was so beautifully longing and then achingly empty at the end.

And oh your Draco! So horribly lonely that he would do anything to end that longing for what he almost had. Poor Harry, that he has to live with that, I can just imagine the breakdown that would most likely follow.

*runs to put on to-be-pimped list* May I friend?

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 06:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Please, friend away.

I know what you mean about Harry's reaction. I wondered the same thing while writing this. Harry was pretty damn depressed before this happened -- what would he do next? I'm sure it would be rather dark and angsty.

[identity profile] dinnee.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 06:44 pm (UTC)(link)
that was absolutely wonderful! I'd like to read more of your work. can I friend you?

xxx Kiara

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-04 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. Please friend away; I'll friend back.

[identity profile] jesuswasajeww.livejournal.com 2004-08-05 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my.
That was great.
If I weren't listening to R Kelly, I'm pretty sure I'd be tearing up.
Ima friend you so I can read more of that :)

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-05 07:40 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm glad R Kelly can keep the tears away. I'll also friend you back.

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2004-08-05 06:30 am (UTC)(link)
GAH!
How dare you break my heart like that? *sobs and points at the ending*

(wow. Great fic. I could almost taste their pain. Draco was just beautiful.)

“I can sense your swirling thoughts. I can taste your despair. Your guilt.”

oh, me too Draco, me too.

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-05 07:43 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I know, the ending is quite sad, isn't it? It's actually what I thought of first (the accidental wand through the heart), and I knew I needed a story to get there.

Glad you liked it.

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[identity profile] kragey.livejournal.com 2004-08-06 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
Oh dear Jesus...I cried. Not weepyweepyweepy, but I had a few tears. That ending actually surprised me, but it's the kind of twist I like. I mean, my head reels with a good twist...and this one rocks. I am so amazed by this fic--it reminds me almost of a fable. =D

Much much much love!

--K

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-06 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. As I've indicated in other comments, I came up with the ending first. One of the major challenges I had (and that my beta had to beat out of me (*kidding*)) was not foreshadowing the ending. I'm glad it was a surprise.

And I got a bit weepy writing it too.

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[identity profile] hdxlover.livejournal.com 2004-08-06 04:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Gasp. *loves it*
:D

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-06 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. Glad I made you gasp.

[identity profile] winterbliss.livejournal.com 2004-08-06 07:56 pm (UTC)(link)
God, that was so hot. Write more! Is there a prologue to this?

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-07 11:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. No, there's no prologue. It's just a one-shot, capturing one moment in time.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/__cerealkiller/ 2004-08-09 05:05 pm (UTC)(link)
i love that. it was amazing. i love your amagination. i hope you dont mind if i friend you?

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-09 08:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. Friend away. I'll friend back.

[identity profile] skytheuplight.livejournal.com 2004-08-09 10:36 pm (UTC)(link)
i loved this.. such a great story! harry killing draco was not what i expected at all! i nearly cried, heh. im gonna add you to my friends list. :D
<3
Sara

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-09 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much. I had come up with the ending first, so it was challenging not to give it away. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I'll friend you back.

[identity profile] jennavere.livejournal.com 2004-08-18 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, very good. Very angsty and sad, but beautiful at the same time. I know you have a great talent for humor, but this angst is wonderful too. I liked how vivid the scene was - you could really see Harry and Draco at the edge of the lake, suffering with their different kinds of despair. And Harry's wand as a stake, I never would have thought of that. Great touch.

Very awesome story! Well done!

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-21 02:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I actually lean a little bit more towards angst, so it's good that I work with arrmaitee, since he helps to bring out my humorous writing.

The idea of Harry's wand as a stake was what I came up with first, and had to write a story to get there! One of my greatest challenges was not foreshadowing the ending.

I'm glad you could see Harry and Draco at the edge of the lake -- that was one of my more vivid images and I'm happy it came out.

I'm thrilled you liked my work.

Daylyn

P.S. Arrmaitee wants you to know that he is going to send you an e-mail to the address listed at fanfiction.net about the hphumor community. So you should be expecting that soon.

Cheers!

[identity profile] draa-velven.livejournal.com 2004-08-19 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
soo sad... but i liked it, a lot. Just friended you so you know.

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-08-21 02:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I'll friend you back.

[identity profile] lellagrrrl.livejournal.com 2004-11-06 01:37 pm (UTC)(link)
oh. that was so... oh.

[identity profile] daylyn.livejournal.com 2004-11-07 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
I know. I feel the same way. Thanks!

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